Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 26, 2021
Mirage
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Tayla, It's Sophie from Toroa. I really like your slideshow, it tells me a lot about mirages and how they trick people and what the cause is. I often see mirages in the car, I get quite confused as it hadn't been raining that day! Maybe next time you could write an introduction, not just going straight into telling us what the post is about. Overall I think you have written a very informative DLO. Looking forward to see what you do next. Have a great break!
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